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1. Respond to 2 classmates’ Journal postings nicely Acknowledge their posts, build upon what they have written, and conclude with a question or thought to further our discussion.
2. PLEASE ONLY ONE PAGE I HAVE 2 CLAMATE WORK READ EACH ONE AND RESPOND IN HAIF A PAGE. TODAYPLS.
3. PLEASE USE THEIR NAME AND NUMBER THERE IS 1 AND 2. SO I WILL UNDERSTAND WHOSE PAGE YOU ARE REPLYING
4. SEE ATTACHMENT FOR 2 CLASSMATE POST

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PLEASE USE THIS QUESTIONS TO REPLY MY CLASS MATE ESSAY ,
PLEASE MENTION THEIR NAME AND BE NICE.

Directions: Answer the following questions with suggestions for how to remedy the issue addressed in the questions.
Please review at least 2 classmates, choosing your classmates based on how many replies they already have (choose those with less):
1. What are the major strengths in this essay?
2. What were the most enjoyable or most interesting aspects of this essay?
3. What are one or two weaknesses in this essay?
4. What is confusing or possibly unconnected to the main argument in this essay?
5. Where can the writer add more evidence, examples, or further explanation in this essay?
6. Does the essay writer summarize the opposition (counter claim)?
7. Does the essay have a conclusion that ties the topic together and offers the audience some idea of what they might do with the information presented?
8. Does the writer use signal phrases to contextualize source information where needed?
9. Does the writer use MLA in-text citations throughout the essay to acknowledge source information in the form of quotes, paraphrases, graphs, images. etc and include a Works Cited formatted in MLA style?
10. Sentence Level and Basic Concerns to comment on:
1. Does the essay have a meaningful title?
2. 4-6 pages?
3. At least 3 sources?
4. Avoids usage of second person “you/your/yours/you’re” throughout? (Can use in intro if directly addressing audience).
5. Uses commas properly?
6. Transitions between topics?
7. Smooth out text (read out loud to listen)? 0 0

1. What are the major strengths in this essay?
2. What were the most enjoyable or most interesting aspects of this essay?
3. What are one or two weaknesses in this essay?
4. What is confusing or possibly unconnected to the main argument in this essay?
5. Where can the writer add more evidence, examples, or further explanation in this essay?
6. Does the essay writer summarize the opposition (counter claim)?
7. Does the essay have a conclusion that ties the topic together and offers the audience some idea of what they might do with the information presented?
8. Does the writer use signal phrases to contextualize source information where needed?
9. Does the writer use MLA in-text citations throughout the essay to acknowledge source information in the form of quotes, paraphrases, graphs, images. etc and include a Works Cited formatted in MLA style?
10. Sentence Level and Basic Concerns to comment on:
1. Does the essay have a meaningful title?
2. 4-6 pages?
3. At least 3 sources?
4. Avoids usage of second person

4 Avoids usage of second person “you/your/yours/you’re” throughout? (Can use in intro if directly addressing audience).
5. Uses commas properly?
6.Transitions between topics?
8. Smooth out text (read out loud to listen)?
SEE ATTACHED STUDENT ESSAY BELOW

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i will attached 3 post of co student please engage in discussion with another student about some part of their original post. Discuss something interesting you noticed, ask a question about some difference you seen between your posts…always look to move the conversation further ahead and see if together, we can respond to every student. T

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i will submit 3 of my classmate’s papers and you will read and respond friendly and one paragraph each .

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I will attached 6 class mate work m, that you will respond to , using the instruction below.
Commenting on Your Classmates’ Journal Posts
You will need to comment on 3 of your peers’ posts
Good comments are constructive, considerate of the author, focus on the purpose of the post, relate to the content of the post, and add meaningful ideas to the discussion. To help you write thoughtful comments, you might find the following “comment starters” helpful:
• “This made me think about…”
• “I wonder why…”
• “Your writing changed my mind because…”
• “This post is relevant because…”
• “Your writing made me think that we should…”
• “I wish I understood why…”
• “This is important because…”
• “Another thing to consider is…”
• “I can relate to this because…”
• “What stood out to me about your post is…”
• “I do/don’t agree with you because…”
• “I look forward to seeing what you write next because…”
• Comments thoughtfully on classmates’ journals
• Meets the word count for posts and comments

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In this discussion you will be writing and receiving peer feedback on your research paper.
This version must be a word document attached to the discussion.

3. Once you have selected a research paper to use, you must follow the Peer Review Checklist to review that paper and provide comments on your partner’s paper.
Research Paper Peer Review Checklist, APA Style 7th Edition ( I will post the research paper pear Review)
4. Post your completed checklist in the discussion by responding to that person’s original post.
5. Your thorough and considered feedback earns you points this week toward your final grade.

5. Responding to Brenda by Melissa

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I WILL UPLOAD INSTRUCTIONS. I HAVE 2 STUDENT PAPERS EACH WILL ONE PAGE PLEASE FOLLOW INSTRUCTIONS STRICTLY.
USE THE INSTRUCTIONS TO ANSWER THE THE 2 STUDENT PAPERS I WILL UPLOAD

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I WILL UPLOAD INSTRUCTIONS. PLEASE FOLLOW INSTRUCTIONS STRICTLY.
USE THE INSTRUCTIONS TO ANSWER THE THE 2 STUDENT PAPERS I WILL UPLOAD

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Bre Jara posted Oct 28, 2021 8:34 PM
If you have any critics or suggestions on what I should write on please do tell!

Exploratory Journal. Jara.docx
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You will post this proposal to the discussion board, and then you will respond to at least two classmates, giving them clear and comprehensive feedback on their proposals. Most notably, you will want to pay attention to how you can help each other to narrow and focus your research questions. Do some revisions to your topic and point of view based on your classmates’ feedback and then email me to discuss questions you have about your topic and veiw point through email.

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Amber Aguirre
Professor Sonja Fleming
English 121
21 October 2021

Research Proposal on Intergenerational Trauma

This research proposal will be based on the impact of intergenerational trauma on families and future generations. This topic is chosen to provide insight on the lasting affects of intergenerational trauma which happens in various places all over the world. I look forward to researching the importance of this topic to be able to evaluate and bring forth the issues and events that have caused havoc on families, and to address why it is important to heal from these detrimental inherited, deep-seeded factors to better improve the quality of life for our own families, our own relationships, our own world. The aim of this study is to ask ourselves; What is the impact of intergenerational trauma on our families, and how does it continue to affect our children, and children’s children?
The overall purpose of this research paper is to learn, understand, and answer questions through obtaining information from clinical expertise, studies, and data. In an effort to better understand the many factors of intergenerational trauma such as mental health; child abuse; poverty; substance abuse; domestic violence; and neglect (just to name a few), this research paper will also dive deep into the theory that epigenetics and patterns of inherited trauma can change the genetic code of offspring and descendants.
Additionally, there will be facts, and examples to answer questions such as; What are the impacts of intergenerational trauma? How is intergenerational trauma passed down from one generation to another? Why is intergenerational trauma a social problem? How does one heal from intergenerational trauma? How does one break intergenerational patterns, and reverse trauma-related epigenetics?
One undeniable fact of the matter is that intergenerational trauma does not discriminate, and it is pervasive throughout the world. My personal agenda is to find out how to stop this phenomenon in my own family by realizing and recognizing that even increased cautiousness, fear, and a conflicted sense of identity are just the tip of the iceberg as far as traits that I need to find how to combat. Awareness, courage, and determination to live a better life is the ultimate goal for everyone. Bringing these issues to the forefront will help people open their eyes and no longer be complacent of these toxic cycles.
Methodology-
The internet, documentaries, and the library will be the methods to obtain information for the researched argument essay. My research plan is to be organized and use different methods of collecting information, so that way I have sufficient information and data to be able to write an intro, background, body, review, researched paragraph, conclusion, and references. I plan to utilize journals, books, magazines, reports, and articles as sources for my paper

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Jaylon Leckie
Professor Fleming
English Comp
19 October 2021
Research Proposal
After looking through the lists of topics and brainstorming, I have decided that my research topic will be social media and the future of society. I chose this topic because in today’s society social media has a huge role in everything and its impact has been huge in the past couple of years. I’ve realized that a lot of my friends and family are highly addicted to social media, which in my view isn’t a good thing. This topic interests me because I’m part of the generation that is highly addicted to social media and our “social status” seems to be a worrying thing in today’s time. It also interests me because I was a victim of addiction to social media and I was always worried about likes or showing people my life behind a screen. I want to learn and research about more about social media in our society. I’m aiming to research the data on how it is affects our mental health and our actual connections we have in real life. I think this topic is important because everyone has social media. After covid hit that’s the only life a lot of people could live. Learning about the effects of it can be eye-opening. In my opinion, I feel like our society is losing touch in human interaction because it’s so easy to access social media and have a life behind a screen. Is social media impacting our mental health and society in a negative way?
Points of view
-People that think social media has no impact on our mental health
-People that do
-People that disagree and think social media is moving society in a positive direction
– Older generation
Current Knowledge
I don’t know a whole lot about social media and the future of society but I do know it has negative effects on mental health and other things. Social media is used to update people and socialize, with strangers and/or family, but some people can take it out of proportion.
Things to find out
I need to find out the impact on society and all of the effects social media has on our own lives.
Methodology
I plan on researching most of the information, but I also want to sit down with family and friends and ask them my research question. Doing this will help me build agreements to the arguments but also counterarguments. I plan on using reliable sources such as news articles, websites, journals. Also, if I have any books that relate to this topic, I would like to read them and use the information I find.

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